This poem speaks to the poet’s deep sense of legacy, family, and the yearning for remembrance. The speaker has dedicated a lifetime—"seventy years"—crafting poems that preserve the lives of their family members. By capturing vivid, intimate scenes of relatives in daily acts of work and creation, the poet hopes to sustain their presence and give readers a glimpse into the essence of these people, as though they were characters in the readers' own lives.
The lines "to flesh out in evocative detail my parents, / my grandparents, cousins, uncles and aunts" illustrate a deliberate and heartfelt attempt to immortalize loved ones. Knowing they will one day pass, the poet seeks to ensure that, in their absence, the poems alone will carry on the family's legacy. There’s a humble acceptance that while true immortality may be elusive, the poet's family might at least "enjoy… a few more good years in the light."
In the second half, the poem shifts into a series of specific memories, tender and vivid: the poet's grandfather patching a tire, his brother weaving a rug, his mother sewing, his father handling brocade. These scenes aren't grand or heroic but evoke a warm intimacy, showcasing ordinary lives that were nonetheless rich with purpose and care. These people are framed in such detailed, loving ways that they feel alive and tangible, even as we recognize that they only persist in memory and poetry.
Finally, there’s a gesture of generosity in the poem's closing image, inviting the reader to draw open the draperies that this family has lovingly crafted, "to see on your lawn / Cousin Eunice Morarend playing her accordion." This moment of music and presence breaks the boundary between past and present, family and stranger, as if to say that the poet's family could be anyone’s family, that their lives are a shared legacy open for others to enjoy.
Overall, this poem is a poignant meditation on memory, art, and the poet’s hope to grant loved ones a form of continuity through the power of words and shared human experience.
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I have spent seventy years trying to persuade you, to manipulate you with the poems I’ve written, to remember my people as if they’d been yours— to flesh out in evocative detail my parents, my grandparents, cousins, uncles and aunts— knowing that one day I’ll be gone, and without me to remember them, the poems I’ve written will have to go it alone. I owe my people so much, and I want them to enjoy—if not immortality—a few more good years in the light,
my grandfather patching a tire for a quarter, his brother weaving a rag rug on his sun porch, my mother at her humming sewing machine, my father un-thumping a bolt of brocade, measuring for new draperies.
Perhaps they were for you, to draw open and see on your lawn Cousin Eunice Morarend playing her accordion.
Deep analysis of a deep poem. Thanks for a fresh perspective.
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